#FourGodsFriday: Beta Reader Insights

It’s #FourGodsFriday! This week I asked one of my beta readers to help me by contributing her ideas to Four Gods Friday. Here’s what she came up with:

Beta: “You should have Gen have a dream like the one he has in Chapter 1. In this dream, he comes upon the goddess Bobina. She’s wearing a sparkling gold gown and a bad wig. Next to her is her sacred moose. He gives him three challenges he must overcome.”

Me: “What challenges?”

Beta: “1: He must die. 2: He must bring himself back to life. And 3: He must touch the moose.”

Me: “So aside from dying, that doesn’t sound too bad.”

Beta: “But the moose is really fast…and it can climb trees…like a koala.”

Me: “Thanks. I’ll consider it.”

These are the conversations I have with my betas sometimes.